Aside from a swift epilogue removal, I would say a small tweak to Snape's memories at the end - I always thought it would have been good to see a memory of his featuring James and Lily getting on/being together and exploring how Snape reacts and feels.
Most of the James/Lily stuff that Harry encounters along the way is pretty negative (and then jumps to them being married) so I think it would have been nice for Harry to see a bit of the transition from disliking each other to love :)
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Date: 2012-03-01 10:44 am (UTC)Most of the James/Lily stuff that Harry encounters along the way is pretty negative (and then jumps to them being married) so I think it would have been nice for Harry to see a bit of the transition from disliking each other to love :)